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@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Collapse OS is a Forth operating system and a collection of tools and
documentation with a single purpose: preserve the ability to program micro-
controllers through civilizational collapse.
It it designed to:
It is designed to:
1. Run on minimal and improvised machines.
2. Interface through improvised means (serial, keyboard, display).
@ -17,9 +17,8 @@ It it designed to:
Additionally, the goal of this project is to be as self-contained as possible.
With a copy of this project, a capable and creative person should be able to
manage to build and install Collapse OS without external resources (i.e.
internet) on a machine of her design, built from scavenged parts with low-tech
tools.
build and install Collapse OS without external resources (i.e. Internet) on a
machine of her design, built from scavenged parts with low-tech tools.
## Getting started
@ -44,22 +43,22 @@ Then, run `0 LIST` for an introduction, follow instructions from there.
## Status
The project unfinished but is progressing well! See [Collapse OS' website][web]
The project is unfinished but progressing well! See [Collapse OS' website][web]
for more information.
## Looking for the assembler version?
The Forth-based Collapse OS is the second incarnation of the concept. The first
The Forth-based Collapse OS is the second incarnation of this concept. The first
one was entirely written in z80 assembly. If you're interested in that
incarnation, checkout the `z80asm` branch.
## Discussion
For a general discussion of Collapse OS and the ecosystem of technologies and
ideas that may develop around it refer to [r/collapseos][discussion]
For a general discussion of Collapse OS, its ecosystem of technologies, and
ideas that may develop around it refer to [r/collapseos][discussion].
A more traditional [mailing list][listserv] and IRC (#collapseos on freenode)
channels are also maintained.
channel are also maintained.
[web]: https://collapseos.org
[discussion]: https://www.reddit.com/r/collapseos