diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 18e73c7..43978c1 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Collapse OS is a Forth operating system and a collection of tools and documentation with a single purpose: preserve the ability to program micro- controllers through civilizational collapse. -It it designed to: +It is designed to: 1. Run on minimal and improvised machines. 2. Interface through improvised means (serial, keyboard, display). @@ -17,9 +17,8 @@ It it designed to: Additionally, the goal of this project is to be as self-contained as possible. With a copy of this project, a capable and creative person should be able to -manage to build and install Collapse OS without external resources (i.e. -internet) on a machine of her design, built from scavenged parts with low-tech -tools. +build and install Collapse OS without external resources (i.e. Internet) on a +machine of her design, built from scavenged parts with low-tech tools. ## Getting started @@ -44,22 +43,22 @@ Then, run `0 LIST` for an introduction, follow instructions from there. ## Status -The project unfinished but is progressing well! See [Collapse OS' website][web] +The project is unfinished but progressing well! See [Collapse OS' website][web] for more information. ## Looking for the assembler version? -The Forth-based Collapse OS is the second incarnation of the concept. The first +The Forth-based Collapse OS is the second incarnation of this concept. The first one was entirely written in z80 assembly. If you're interested in that incarnation, checkout the `z80asm` branch. ## Discussion -For a general discussion of Collapse OS and the ecosystem of technologies and -ideas that may develop around it refer to [r/collapseos][discussion] +For a general discussion of Collapse OS, its ecosystem of technologies, and +ideas that may develop around it refer to [r/collapseos][discussion]. A more traditional [mailing list][listserv] and IRC (#collapseos on freenode) -channels are also maintained. +channel are also maintained. [web]: https://collapseos.org [discussion]: https://www.reddit.com/r/collapseos